AI無法取代的語言訓練:寫作

寫作是大學聯考頂標的關鍵,是留學考錄取頂級學校的指標,更是發展創造力,不被AI取代的要素

超凡遠距在2023年成功幫助多位學員在大學聯考獲得15滿級分,英文幫助他們錄取頂尖大學的熱門科系,因為在國家政策的帶領下,英文是各科系極為重視的項目。

(1) 圖片式寫作
大學聯考學測及全民英檢初級中級常出現的的考試模式。學員依據圖片及提示撰寫一篇長約120字的文章。

(2) 主題式寫作
這是各項考試均須具備的寫作能力。學員依據題目說明及寫作主題完成一篇長約150字的短文,參加留學考的學員必須寫長約250字以上的短文。

(3) 筆譯全文
這是進階為優秀寫作者的核心訓練,學員依據訓練層級,將指定中文文章翻譯成英文。此項訓練對學習者的文法及用詞均有極大幫助。

學員只要建立Google雲端共用資料夾,超凡遠距上傳訓練內容,然後學員進行:

學員可以手寫或打字完成作業,完成後上傳至雲端資料夾。

超凡遠距學員將完成作品上傳至雲端資料夾,雲端英語教練提供改善建議

你可以省下大量寶貴的時間完成最完整的寫作訓練,輕鬆應付大學考、留學考、及具備AI無法取代的語言創造力。這一切就在超凡遠距。

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Where will be the place of our children in the future?

學習單字

  1. outstrip (程度或成就上)超過
  2. clock需時;達到一個時間
  3. intervention 干涉
  4. impressive令人印象深刻的
  5. autonomous 自動化的
  6. champion冠軍
  7. identify辨識
  8. reflect反省
  9. exaggerate誇張說法

In one or two decades, AI will outstrip many of the abilities we humans believe make us different from animals and machines.

In 2016, Google’s self-driving cars clocked 1,023,330km, and required human intervention 124 times. That is one human intervention about every 8,047km of autonomous driving. What makes the figure impressive is, in 2015, it was 4 interventions every 8,047km. In order words, autonomous driving had made a 400% improvement.

Today, self-driving cars may not be a norm. It is already a reality. You probably think “how nice!” We can take a nap on our way to office because AI can drive for us. But what about playing chess! A computer has beat the human chess champion a few times. And the computer is now identifying tumor for doctors and cooking recipes for chefs. AI is even helping our kids learn English😣.

I wonder what my daughters will be doing in the future. They will never solve a math question faster or lift an object heavier than AI does. They will never drive better. They are human, so they can never become the best chess player. And language, the best thing I pass down to them through telling them many good stories, is no more their advantage since real-time machine translation has made huge improvement. They are likely to lose every battle against AI, aren’t they?

No! What exactly makes humans special? We dream, imagine, reflect, and even regret! We pretend, invent, exaggerate, and go crazy. That’s right! We are different from AI because we create.

國一Judy演講稿的形成

中文原稿:演講者先以中文撰寫演講稿。

長大

大人們常常會說:「你長大了,你變得懂事了」,但是,你知道什麼是真正的長大嗎?長大不是你到了某個年紀,就叫長大,我覺得長大就是在你經歷了某件事之後的某個瞬間,你會覺得所有事情都不一樣了,而那個瞬間只有自己會懂。在那個瞬間,你會發現你必須學會獨立,必須學會控制自己的情緒,必須變得成熟,不能在像以前的自己一樣,想怎樣就怎樣的哭鬧。

講個例子,有一天在我要去學校之前,我覺得那個心態變得跟之前不一樣了,不在跟以前一樣,去了學校就開始聊天,而是變得異常安靜,我的朋友們都來問我怎麼了,但是,說真的我也不知道我怎麼了,我就是突然不想講話,只想坐在那安靜的看書,腦中突然就浮現幾句話「你要認真」,「你要成熟」隨著這幾句話的出現,我就知道,我終於長大了

中文修正稿
將文章的每個句子組織成(主詞+動詞+受詞/補助詞+介係詞片語+複詞)結構。

長大

大人們常常會說:「等你長大了,你就知道很多真理,就變成熟了。」
但是,我對長大有不同的看法。

甚麼是真正的長大呢?並不是你到了某個年紀,你就長大了。長大只是某一個瞬間,那是當你經歷了某件事的瞬間。當那個瞬間來臨,你會覺得所有事情都不一樣了,而那個瞬間只有自己會懂。在那個瞬間之後,你會發現你必須學會獨立,必須學會控制自己的情緒,你必須變得成熟,你不能在像以前一樣,想怎樣就怎樣或像小孩子一樣哭鬧。我有過那個瞬間。

有一天在我要去學校之前,我覺得我的心變得跟以前不一樣了,那一天,我到了學校不再跟以前一樣開始跟同學聊天。對我而言,那一天變得非常安靜,我只坐著看書,我對自己說「你要用功努力,你要成熟。」當這幾句話的出現,我知道我終於長大成熟了。

那一天我的朋友們來問我怎麼了,但是,我只是微笑說,沒事啊!我突然不像以前一樣多話,我只是知道那是新的一天,那是新的我。

中文翻譯英文原稿:根據中文修正稿的結構翻譯成英文演講稿。

Growing Up!

It doesn’t take a long time to grow up! Adults often say, “When you grow up, you will know a lot of truths and become mature."

However, I have a different view of growing up. What really is growing up? It’s not that you grow up when you reach a certain age. Growing up is just a moment. That is the moment when you experience something. When that moment comes, you will feel that everything is different. And only you will understand that moment. After that moment, you will find that you must learn to be independent,you must learn to control your emotions, you must become mature, you can’t do whatever you want or cry like a child like before. 

I have had that moment. One day before I was going went to school, I felt that my heart mind became different from before.That day, when I arrived at school, I stopped chatting with my classmates as before. For me, that day became very quiet.I just sat reading. I said to myself, “You have to work hard, you have to be mature."When these few words appeared, I knew that I had finally grown up and become mature. My friends came to ask me what was wrong that day, but I just smiled and said, “I am OK! Suddenly I am not as talkative as before.

I just know that it is a new day. That is the new me now.

中文翻譯英文修正稿:需要修正的地方很少。

Growing Up!

It doesn’t take a long time to grow up!Adults often say, “When you grow up, you will know a lot of truths and become mature."

However, I have a different view of growing up. What really is growing up? It’s not that you grow up when you reach a certain age. Growing up is just a moment. That is the moment when you experience something. When that moment comes, you will feel that everything is different. And only you understand that moment. After that moment, you will find that you must learn to be independent, you must learn to control your emotions, you must become mature, you can’t do whatever you want or cry like a child like before. I have had that moment.

One day before I went to school, I felt that my mind became different from before.
That day, when I arrived at school, I stopped chatting with my classmates as before. 
For me, that day became very quiet.I just sat reading. I said to myself, “You have to work hard, you have to be mature." When these few words appeared, I knew that I had finally grown up and become mature. My friends came to ask me what was wrong that day, but I just smiled and said, “I am OK! Suddenly I am not as talkative as before.

I just know that it is a new day. That is the new me now.

這樣的演講稿幾乎都是學員自行發想及撰稿,不必死背也記得內容,忘記原講稿內容也沒關係,因為已經具備英文句子的結構概念,也有足夠的造句能力自行造句。

學員準備要站上演講台演講中。

My Life

Once upon a time there was a little boy.

His hair curly and eyes watery.

At age of five he was full of joy.

His parents showered him with love and toys.

He kept all his goodies in a big smiley trolley.

All day long he played and cuddled with mommy.

For all the snacks from daddy he turned out chubby.

But nonetheless he was happy.

Eat sleep and play, in the blink of an eye 5 years gone by

At age of 10 he was full of passion.

Ready for expressive exploration

His mind was curious and always in action

For he found interest in artistic creation.

His world was a safari wild imagination.

All day long he sketched and made flip-page animation.

For all the crayons he used up, art was an addiction.

But nonetheless he was happy.

Sketch, learn, and daydream, in the blink of an eye 5 years gone by.

At age of 15 he was living in a foreign land.

Now a teenager trying to understand

Future uncertain and nothing was as planned

For he had a lot to adjust and comprehend.

He swam hard to outlast this survival quicksand.

All day long he trained and prepared to take his stand.

For all the trials his will to win was hard to bend.

But nonetheless he was happy.

Adapt fight and cope, in the blink of an eye 5 years gone by.

At age of 20 he was rolling all on his own.

Becoming an adult the boy had grown.

It’s time to get real with fairyland long gone,

For he had lots to prove and doubts to contain.

Nervousness was a goblin rattling his bone.

All day long he studied and learned in the battle zone.

For all the challenges he managed his best to shine.

But nonetheless he was happy.

Study, equip, and excel; in the blink of an eye 5 years gone by.

At age of 25 he worked years straight in a row,

Entering business hoping for a dazzling show.

His calls never stop and was always on the go,

For the first taste of victory his ego grew.

He would kill for more with a big crossbow.

All day long he plotted and manipulated with his claws,

For all the toil and blood his career thrived but left many in woe.

But nonetheless he was happy.

Work, hustle and grind; in the blink of an eye 5 years gone by.

At age of 30 he had given work all his soul,

Danced with wolves and kept goons on payroll.

His portfolio grew but his heart a black hole,

For he started to ponder life’s true meaning and goal.

He prayed for revelation but heard fuck all.

All day long he wandered while keeping mind in control.

For all he achieved and built, it was time to leave it all,

So he could eventually save his soul.

He set sail to take back what the world stole.

Travel, read and reflect; in the blink of an eye 5 years gone by

At age of 35 he made new plans to expand.

By fate he returned to his motherland,

Refocused for life’s meaning now he understands.

He set hands only on works delightful to command,

Balancing his life because love he had found.

All day long he worked on the wonderland of his own.

For all the art and beauty we have on hand, life can be grand.

There is nothing wrong to be curious once again.

We can have fun even with a pot of sand.

We can play with words like waving a magic wand.

I’m here sharing with you my poem for you are my dear friends.

The boy was once lost but saved himself.

He used to chase blindly with a butcher knife.

Now he savors time and cherish his pretty wife.

There are no little moments in life;

For the little moments are life itself.

Be happy now for there is no afterlife.

Learn to take it easy and be kind to yourself.

by 曾宥誠 (Patrick Saint)

另一個春天

李芊樺 Bibi Lee 於16歲

    春天有千百種樣子,可以是繁花似錦,可以是綠林繁茂,可以是綠野邈闊,可以是山川壯麗,也可以是流水盈盈,在於我們如何觀賞春、如何品嘗春,當我們選擇用不同方法或從不同面向迎接春,我們將會有全然不同的感受。

    從前的我也曾認為春只有一種容貌,就是奼紫嫣紅的花爭相在一季綻放,個個爭奇鬥豔,像是要博君王一笑的深宮妃嬪,無不使出渾身解術的爭寵。可總有較為無寵的一些,我便為了她們嘆息,她們同樣付出了一生,將所有的青春歲月展於一刻,卻沒有得到她們所求的寵愛和榮華,便逐漸衰老,花黃後,就更沒有人願意駐足觀賞了,她們只能任自己凋零,落入春泥,終究也只滋養了那些受聖寵的勢力罷了,令人惋惜。君王無情,現代忙碌的人也無情,只能瞥見那些極致豔麗的嫵媚,從不注意淡妝的素淨。因此,我總是覺得春季充滿著撲鼻的胭脂水粉的香氣,既刺鼻也俗氣,同時也好像感受的一股幽怨氣息,從那深不可見的深處傳出,我想,那便是冷宮吧。我自然而然的對春季的濃豔不以為然,更不可能仔細去探訪春的內在、春的美了。

   一直到某一個春天,當我一如既往的感覺到花的悲情,我得知家中家族旅遊要到山上健行賞花,我滿腔的不願意,可惜終究不能逃避的上了山。當我站到山頂時,我簡直不能想像這是我心中滿載怨言的春,因為一切的風光竟是如此的沁人心脾,我甚至還在這春光滿溢的山野間和眾多古人相遇了。壯麗的山充滿著豪情壯志,高大挺拔的身軀、不朽的氣息,像極了赤壁戰場上的關雲長,縈繞在群山間的雲翳,讓我彷彿看到在滾滾黃沙中奔騰的赤兔馬,噠噠的馬蹄聲,軍容浩大。接著便是邈闊的草原了,青綠的草原有陣陣春風拂過,讓我仿若遇見了朗目疏眉的潘安,頎長的身材、飄散的長髮、無瑕的面容,眉宇間盡是道不盡的俊朗清秀,令人心醉。身旁滿山遍野的花兒,沒有過於濃艷的妝容,皆是素雅的淡色系,像極了輕盈有翩然飛舞之姿的趙飛燕,不盈一握的纖細腰肢、細滑的烏黑長髮、紗質的水袖,無不令人讚嘆連連。在這一刻,我非但沒有感受到寒涼的幽怨,甚至沈醉於春的細緻,清風拂面、花香四溢,捲起了泥土的氣息,撲面而來是春的清新、春的明媚,也是春的歡活。

    我在山上遇見了不同於以往的春天,打破了我對春的偏見,我發現在無限春光中,美的不只是萬物的繽紛絢爛,更是讓人愉悅的氣氛。春,是最適合與自然和諧交流的時機,在這樣的季節,我們該更加珍惜每個與自然共處的時光,仔細地、慎重地去品嚐春,這個充滿青春氣息的季。

我的童年

李其興 Paul Lee

昨夜又夢見小時候的家
在大白天  卻整片天空黑壓壓
突然 雨像彈珠般敲打著爸爸鋪的波浪屋頂
我蹲在屋頂下向外望 
唉 大哥今天無法騎腳踏車載我溜搭
也許二哥會即興來個水彩畫吧

雨水流到屋頂的邊緣   變成了瀑布
透過瀑布 花園裡姊姊種的花與樹在雨中跳舞
馬路上穿梭著斗笠下快快踩著騎腳踏車的農夫

我將折好的小紙船放在手心上
慢慢地將手背沉入瀑布冰水形成的小河上
好奇地盯著紙船搖搖晃晃 慢慢地 遠航…

我的童年沒有時間
突然聽到媽媽熟悉的聲音 我站起來 轉過身
原來爸媽兄姊一直微笑站在我後邊…

Love and Growth

隨手現代詩,運用單字outgrow (長大了而不再需要…)

Love and Growth

Boys outgrow toy cars.
Girls outgrow Barbies.
But, they never outgrow those
Who stayed with them through hard times.

Parents,
Don’t just give your children toys and dolls.
Give them your words and hands.

愛 成長

男孩長大後遺忘了玩具車;
女孩長大後遺忘了洋娃娃;
但 他們永遠不會忘記誰陪他們度過難熬的時光。

爸爸媽媽啊!
別只是供應你的孩子玩具及洋娃娃;
握他們的手  跟他們說說話。

IF– 如果

<If—>是英國詩人Rudyard Kipling於1895年創作的一首短詩,讀過多次,今天受感動多一些,雖然中文翻譯版本很多,我喜歡自己動手,跟大家分享共勉。

如果

IF

如果別人將他們的失敗責怪你  你仍然保持冷靜
如果別人質疑你但你相信自己  而且寬容那質疑
如果你能等待且不厭倦於等待  被欺騙卻不欺騙
或  被憎恨不為所動
不急於鋒芒外露  不急於侃侃而談

如果你有夢想卻不被夢想主宰  有想法卻不受限
如果你經歷了各種成功與失敗  對兩者公平對待
如果你忍受你說的實話被扭曲  被用來誤導他人
或  生活意義被摧毀
卻只能彎腰低頭  用殘破工具修復

如果你做對的事並且付出一切  擲骰子般定輸贏
輸了就重新開始  不逢人怨聲載道
如果你有心有魄力且用盡體力  即使早沒有氣力
你一無所有撐住  用意志力說撐住

如果你能與人對談時保持正直  帝王同行不忘本
如果你的敵人朋友無法傷害你  你尊重人而不過
如果你以百米衝刺的每秒速度  填補無情每分鐘
你就擁有世界以及世界上一切  孩子你是大人了

If you can keep your head when all about you  
    Are losing theirs and blaming it on you,   
If you can trust yourself when all men doubt you,
    But make allowance for their doubting too;   
If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,
    Or being lied about, don’t deal in lies,
Or being hated, don’t give way to hating,
    And yet don’t look too good, nor talk too wise:

If you can dream—and not make dreams your master;   
    If you can think—and not make thoughts your aim;   
If you can meet with Triumph and Disaster
    And treat those two impostors just the same; 
If you can bear to hear the truth you’ve spoken
    Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools,
Or watch the things you gave your life to, broken,
    And stoop and build ’em up with worn-out tools:

If you can make one heap of all your winnings
    And risk it on one turn of pitch-and-toss,
And lose, and start again at your beginnings
    And never breathe a word about your loss;
If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
    To serve your turn long after they are gone,   
And so hold on when there is nothing in you
    Except the Will which says to them: ‘Hold on!’

If you can talk with crowds and keep your virtue,   
    Or walk with Kings—nor lose the common touch,
If neither foes nor loving friends can hurt you,
    If all men count with you, but none too much;
If you can fill the unforgiving minute
    With sixty seconds’ worth of distance run,   
Yours is the Earth and everything that’s in it,   
    And—which is more—you’ll be a Man, my son!