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長大
大人們常常會說:「你長大了,你變得懂事了」,但是,你知道什麼是真正的長大嗎?長大不是你到了某個年紀,就叫長大,我覺得長大就是在你經歷了某件事之後的某個瞬間,你會覺得所有事情都不一樣了,而那個瞬間只有自己會懂。在那個瞬間,你會發現你必須學會獨立,必須學會控制自己的情緒,必須變得成熟,不能在像以前的自己一樣,想怎樣就怎樣的哭鬧。
講個例子,有一天在我要去學校之前,我覺得那個心態變得跟之前不一樣了,不在跟以前一樣,去了學校就開始聊天,而是變得異常安靜,我的朋友們都來問我怎麼了,但是,說真的我也不知道我怎麼了,我就是突然不想講話,只想坐在那安靜的看書,腦中突然就浮現幾句話「你要認真」,「你要成熟」隨著這幾句話的出現,我就知道,我終於長大了
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長大
大人們常常會說:「等你長大了,你就知道很多真理,就變成熟了。」
但是,我對長大有不同的看法。
甚麼是真正的長大呢?並不是你到了某個年紀,你就長大了。長大只是某一個瞬間,那是當你經歷了某件事的瞬間。當那個瞬間來臨,你會覺得所有事情都不一樣了,而那個瞬間只有自己會懂。在那個瞬間之後,你會發現你必須學會獨立,必須學會控制自己的情緒,你必須變得成熟,你不能在像以前一樣,想怎樣就怎樣或像小孩子一樣哭鬧。我有過那個瞬間。
有一天在我要去學校之前,我覺得我的心變得跟以前不一樣了,那一天,我到了學校不再跟以前一樣開始跟同學聊天。對我而言,那一天變得非常安靜,我只坐著看書,我對自己說「你要用功努力,你要成熟。」當這幾句話的出現,我知道我終於長大成熟了。
那一天我的朋友們來問我怎麼了,但是,我只是微笑說,沒事啊!我突然不像以前一樣多話,我只是知道那是新的一天,那是新的我。
中文翻譯英文原稿:根據中文修正稿的結構翻譯成英文演講稿。
Growing Up!
It doesn’t take a long time to grow up! Adults often say, “When you grow up, you will know a lot of truths and become mature."
However, I have a different view of growing up. What really is growing up? It’s not that you grow up when you reach a certain age. Growing up is just a moment. That is the moment when you experience something. When that moment comes, you will feel that everything is different. And only you will understand that moment. After that moment, you will find that you must learn to be independent,you must learn to control your emotions, you must become mature, you can’t do whatever you want or cry like a child like before.
I have had that moment. One day before I was going went to school, I felt that my heart mind became different from before.That day, when I arrived at school, I stopped chatting with my classmates as before. For me, that day became very quiet.I just sat reading. I said to myself, “You have to work hard, you have to be mature."When these few words appeared, I knew that I had finally grown up and become mature. My friends came to ask me what was wrong that day, but I just smiled and said, “I am OK! Suddenly I am not as talkative as before.
I just know that it is a new day. That is the new me now.
中文翻譯英文修正稿:需要修正的地方很少。
Growing Up!
It doesn’t take a long time to grow up!Adults often say, “When you grow up, you will know a lot of truths and become mature."
However, I have a different view of growing up. What really is growing up? It’s not that you grow up when you reach a certain age. Growing up is just a moment. That is the moment when you experience something. When that moment comes, you will feel that everything is different. And only you understand that moment. After that moment, you will find that you must learn to be independent, you must learn to control your emotions, you must become mature, you can’t do whatever you want or cry like a child like before. I have had that moment.
One day before I went to school, I felt that my mind became different from before.
That day, when I arrived at school, I stopped chatting with my classmates as before.
For me, that day became very quiet.I just sat reading. I said to myself, “You have to work hard, you have to be mature." When these few words appeared, I knew that I had finally grown up and become mature. My friends came to ask me what was wrong that day, but I just smiled and said, “I am OK! Suddenly I am not as talkative as before.
I just know that it is a new day. That is the new me now.
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